The intro drums definitely need some work. I like how they sound in the body of the song though. However, the song as a whole is lacking that crunchy, "punch in the throat" sorta sound. Starting with the guitar, it sounds like it's in a tin can. Try boosting the bass on them. And I think the kick drum could be a bit boomier... or louder or something.
Anyways, I like the riffing.
This song's great, my one criticism would be that you use a midi guitar. Though the guitar's riff in the intro sounds great and is catchy, it'd make the song that much better i you recorded an actual guitar. I know you may not have the equipment necessary for this, but whatever.
that's a great idea, unfortunately you're right, i don't have the equipment (or the necessary skills, i'm horrible at picking). if you or anyone you know want to record the riff themselves, i'd gladly edit it in. thanks for the feedback!
I'm lovin' the happy upbeat feel of this. Intro is awesome.
Thanks im really glad you enjoyed it. :)
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